Fred's Inside Story

**X-3** · 10-16-2009, 03:42 PM

Let's see if I can keep a comic going.

These characters are Jay's, who took them from Nintendo and infused them with flavor and character. And gave them a home.
Fred, Bill and Donez sprites were taken from those sprite sheets MushMan made, and I got the idea for this after reading his fancomic, as strange as that sounds.

Also, I just saw that movie recently, hence the lame reference.

Dizzy · 10-16-2009, 03:51 PM

Redshirt · 10-16-2009, 03:56 PM

Sounds good to me.

**X-3** · 10-16-2009, 05:46 PM

Chapter 1: The First Stuff Goes Down

Redshirt · 10-16-2009, 05:50 PM

Hmm... why is Metal Man popping in the last panel?

Metal Man · 10-16-2009, 05:56 PM

He had to Drink a Dr. Pepper, obviously.

SmithyGCN · 10-18-2009, 01:58 PM

um.... Right. n_n;

Well, anyway, this has a promising premise, so I'll like to see where this heads before I give an opinion. the first few pages seem a little odd, but there's still time for this to pick up the pace.

**X-3** · 10-24-2009, 03:25 PM

Hammer Soul: Luigi's Hyper Mode. Luigi copies the abilities of a Hammer Bro he knew long ago. The mighty Terra Hammer strikes hard, but swings slowly.

Redshirt · 10-24-2009, 03:40 PM

Why did everyone go bonk.

Poor fred.

**X-3** · 10-24-2009, 03:55 PM

I'll elaborate on these unexplained sound effects.
The pop was Metal's monocle.
The bonks were the rubble from Fred's crash into the place hitting Metal, Donez and Bill.

Thanks for pointing out how these 'effects' were basically unexplained, guys. I'll try to make things like this more clear from here on out.

...also, further rubble should look like rubble...

Luigiman7 · 10-24-2009, 04:49 PM

I LAUGHED SO HARD WHEN MARIO ROLLED AWAY, OH MY GOD.

SPIN DASH

The Spark · 10-24-2009, 07:38 PM

Sounds very relevant to "Bowser's Inside Story".

PONIES · 10-24-2009, 07:40 PM

lol, thats pretty good

Redshirt · 10-24-2009, 08:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by X-3

...also, further rubble should look like rubble...

Yeah I thought those where motion lines.

**X-3** · 10-25-2009, 04:36 PM

Dizzy · 10-25-2009, 05:04 PM

Yay, Phone has returned!

Redshirt · 10-25-2009, 05:25 PM

Metal Man is acting like Jay now. Which makes the comic funnier.

Luigiman7 · 10-25-2009, 05:30 PM

Jill has always been my favorite NC character. I love her in this.

Also, Metal's not getting sucked in?

Dizzy · 10-25-2009, 07:01 PM

I would like to see Giant-Knives-Instead-Of-Arms Man...

*praise*

...or Waluigi.

*shot*

Gabriel · 10-26-2009, 04:38 PM

YEAH WALUIGI *shot*

...

...

Waluigi!! *shot again*

10-16-2009, 03:42 PM	#1
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	Fred's Inside Story Let's see if I can keep a comic going. These characters are Jay's, who took them from Nintendo and infused them with flavor and character. And gave them a home. Fred, Bill and Donez sprites were taken from those sprite sheets MushMan made, and I got the idea for this after reading his fancomic, as strange as that sounds. Also, I just saw that movie recently, hence the lame reference.

10-16-2009, 03:51 PM	#2
Dizzy Podiaphobe Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 19,359 Thanks: 1,764 Thanked 1,161 Times in 804 Posts Blog Entries: 116	OK.

10-24-2009, 03:25 PM	#8
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	Hammer Soul: Luigi's Hyper Mode. Luigi copies the abilities of a Hammer Bro he knew long ago. The mighty Terra Hammer strikes hard, but swings slowly. Last edited by X-3; 10-24-2009 at 03:31 PM.

10-24-2009, 03:55 PM	#10
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	I'll elaborate on these unexplained sound effects. The pop was Metal's monocle. The bonks were the rubble from Fred's crash into the place hitting Metal, Donez and Bill. Thanks for pointing out how these 'effects' were basically unexplained, guys. I'll try to make things like this more clear from here on out. ...also, further rubble should look like rubble... Last edited by X-3; 10-24-2009 at 04:01 PM.

10-24-2009, 04:49 PM	#11
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	I LAUGHED SO HARD WHEN MARIO ROLLED AWAY, OH MY GOD. SPIN DASH __________________ ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ＷＯＮ’Ｔ　ＹＯＵ　ＢＥＣＯＭＥ　Ａ　ＭＡＧＩＣＡＬ　ＧＩＲＬ？

10-16-2009, 03:56 PM	#3
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Sounds good to me.

10-16-2009, 05:46 PM	#4
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	Chapter 1: The First Stuff Goes Down

10-16-2009, 05:50 PM	#5
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Hmm... why is Metal Man popping in the last panel?

10-16-2009, 05:56 PM	#6
Metal Man Fairy-Slaying Maniac Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: 1592 Miles Away From Here Gender: Posts: 18,062 Thanks: 148 Thanked 683 Times in 482 Posts	He had to Drink a Dr. Pepper, obviously.

10-18-2009, 01:58 PM	#7
SmithyGCN Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Texas Gender: Posts: 170 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	um.... Right. n_n; Well, anyway, this has a promising premise, so I'll like to see where this heads before I give an opinion. the first few pages seem a little odd, but there's still time for this to pick up the pace.

10-24-2009, 03:40 PM	#9
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Why did everyone go bonk. Poor fred.

10-24-2009, 07:38 PM	#12
The Spark Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: At the bottom of the shipping address list Gender: Posts: 1,743 Thanks: 156 Thanked 74 Times in 54 Posts	Sounds very relevant to "Bowser's Inside Story".

10-24-2009, 07:40 PM	#13
PONIES Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Griffon village Gender: Posts: 2,508 Thanks: 680 Thanked 54 Times in 45 Posts Blog Entries: 9	lol, thats pretty good

10-25-2009, 04:36 PM	#15
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10

10-25-2009, 05:04 PM	#16
Dizzy Podiaphobe Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 19,359 Thanks: 1,764 Thanked 1,161 Times in 804 Posts Blog Entries: 116	Yay, Phone has returned!

10-25-2009, 05:25 PM	#17
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Metal Man is acting like Jay now. Which makes the comic funnier.

10-25-2009, 05:30 PM	#18
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	Jill has always been my favorite NC character. I love her in this. Also, Metal's not getting sucked in? __________________ ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ＷＯＮ’Ｔ　ＹＯＵ　ＢＥＣＯＭＥ　Ａ　ＭＡＧＩＣＡＬ　ＧＩＲＬ？

10-25-2009, 07:01 PM	#19
Dizzy Podiaphobe Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 19,359 Thanks: 1,764 Thanked 1,161 Times in 804 Posts Blog Entries: 116	I would like to see Giant-Knives-Instead-Of-Arms Man... praise ...or Waluigi. shot

10-26-2009, 04:38 PM	#20
Gabriel Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Pesterchum~ Gender: Posts: 2,752 Thanks: 206 Thanked 139 Times in 115 Posts	YEAH WALUIGI shot ... ... Waluigi!! shot again