Distortion of the Comics Forum

MeowMan · 12-03-2009, 06:36 PM

I know that I did horrible on.. almost everything. But I don't care.

Yeah, I know that that part was short, but PLEASE don't bother me about the length of it. But please do tell me what and how to improve on.

CREDITS:
DarkZero by DarkZero
MeowMan by DarkZero
Eric by DarkZero
Mushman by Mushman

Anything that happens to or with the sprites in this comic is not meant to offend the person that that sprite represents.

I will update this when I feel like it. Which could possibly be tomorrow. Or next month. Meh.

Luigiman7 · 12-03-2009, 06:53 PM

Layer the text so that the one who is talking has their text first. That way it would be readable. And you can copy and paste the background before hand also.

also mushman got his head cutoff lol

Other than that, good so far. Let's see how this unfolds.

MeowMan · 12-03-2009, 06:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LuigiWoman

Layer the text so that the one who is talking has their text first. That way it would be readable.

Layer? How do I do that?

Quote:

Originally Posted by LuigiWoman

And you can copy and paste the background before hand also.

I thought about that when I was half way done with it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by LuigiWoman

also mushman got his head cutoff lol

Err... That was an accident with GIMP when I was turning everyone around..

Oh, and I will tell you the parts hidden by the stars.

1st panel: DZ: They probably died.
2nd panel: DZ: If you weren't too lazy to turn me around, I would be looking right now.
3rd panel: DZ AGAIN!: Oh, there you are, lackey!
Last panel:ALL OF THEM ARE DZ!!:Where is the popcorn......? MeowMan is running, right?

Also, DZ, do you have an effect for that laser-arm thing, will you make one, or should I use Mushmans phaser effect?

Luigiman7 · 12-03-2009, 07:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MeowMan

Layer? How do I do that?

Stacked. In a row.

MeowMan · 12-03-2009, 07:03 PM

Um.. I kinda did do that..

Luigiman7 · 12-03-2009, 07:10 PM

The one speaking first, have their text on the left. We have to read left to right.

MeowMan · 12-03-2009, 07:11 PM

Oh. Um.... That wouldn't work for me. Just read the one that's highest up first.

Luigiman7 · 12-03-2009, 07:25 PM

Well, you gotta fix that. Most people don't like reading right to left.

MeowMan · 12-03-2009, 08:35 PM

*grumble* UGGGGGGGGH! I'm not sure how to fix it that way... No, I can't for this. Please, it's not all right to left. It's just top first, bottom last. It's not so hard to read that way. Or I can put all of the text over in one box on the top, if that would work better for you. (Which I highly doubt)

Anyway, here is the next one(I know it was quick. I just got really bored):

CREDITS:
MeowMan by DarkZero
Jailbreaker by Jailbreaker (who is now rekaerbliaJ)

Dizzy · 12-03-2009, 09:37 PM

Try to avoid using text wherever it may clash with the background.

As a matter of fact, work on your colors. If you know how to edit colors, then use that. Get subtler shades.

MeowMan · 12-03-2009, 09:38 PM

Excuse me? Subtler? Yeah, I know how to edit colors, but for some reason, my computer wont let me use them.

Dizzy · 12-03-2009, 09:51 PM

Notice the subtler shades.

About your sprites: The fact that your palette matches mine disturbs me.

Metal Man · 12-03-2009, 09:56 PM

May I suggest saving in PNG instead of hueg BMPs?

Dizzy · 12-03-2009, 09:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MeowMan

Excuse me? Subtler? Yeah, I know how to edit colors, but for some reason, my computer wont let me use them.

You have to click "Define Custom Colors >>", select a color, then click "Add to Custom Colors", and it should be somewhere on your color bar.

Redshirt · 12-04-2009, 12:27 PM

So did I get killed?

Tip:
If the color of your text is going clash with the background either change it or use word bubbles.

MeowMan · 12-04-2009, 03:35 PM

DZ:
1.What does "subtler" mean?
2.That's probably because you made them.

Metal Man: Yeah.. I though that I was saving them as PNGs but the thing switched on me.

Mushman: No. You'll see what happens to you.

Eric · 12-04-2009, 04:47 PM

So I'm...Evil?

JK

Evil is AWSUM.

MeowMan · 12-04-2009, 04:50 PM

You only read the first one, didn't you? DZ is evil, too.

Eric · 12-04-2009, 04:53 PM

no I read both...

I'd rather be a loner though...

Is this what you thought I would be offended by?

MeowMan · 12-04-2009, 04:55 PM

Err.. Yeah..

12-03-2009, 06:36 PM	#1
MeowMan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Pegasus Gender: Posts: 6,606 Thanks: 849 Thanked 208 Times in 132 Posts Blog Entries: 46	Distortion of the Comics Forum I know that I did horrible on.. almost everything. But I don't care. Yeah, I know that that part was short, but PLEASE don't bother me about the length of it. But please do tell me what and how to improve on. CREDITS: DarkZero by DarkZero MeowMan by DarkZero Eric by DarkZero Mushman by Mushman Anything that happens to or with the sprites in this comic is not meant to offend the person that that sprite represents. I will update this when I feel like it. Which could possibly be tomorrow. Or next month. Meh. Last edited by MeowMan; 12-03-2009 at 06:51 PM.

12-03-2009, 06:53 PM	#2
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	Layer the text so that the one who is talking has their text first. That way it would be readable. And you can copy and paste the background before hand also. also mushman got his head cutoff lol Other than that, good so far. Let's see how this unfolds. __________________ ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ＷＯＮ’Ｔ　ＹＯＵ　ＢＥＣＯＭＥ　Ａ　ＭＡＧＩＣＡＬ　ＧＩＲＬ？

12-03-2009, 07:10 PM	#6
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	FINE THEN GEEZ The one speaking first, have their text on the left. We have to read left to right. __________________ ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ＷＯＮ’Ｔ　ＹＯＵ　ＢＥＣＯＭＥ　Ａ　ＭＡＧＩＣＡＬ　ＧＩＲＬ？

12-03-2009, 07:25 PM	#8
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	Well, you gotta fix that. Most people don't like reading right to left. __________________ ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ＷＯＮ’Ｔ　ＹＯＵ　ＢＥＣＯＭＥ　Ａ　ＭＡＧＩＣＡＬ　ＧＩＲＬ？

12-03-2009, 08:35 PM	#9
MeowMan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Pegasus Gender: Posts: 6,606 Thanks: 849 Thanked 208 Times in 132 Posts Blog Entries: 46	grumble UGGGGGGGGH! I'm not sure how to fix it that way... No, I can't for this. Please, it's not all right to left. It's just top first, bottom last. It's not so hard to read that way. Or I can put all of the text over in one box on the top, if that would work better for you. (Which I highly doubt) Anyway, here is the next one(I know it was quick. I just got really bored): CREDITS: MeowMan by DarkZero Jailbreaker by Jailbreaker (who is now rekaerbliaJ) Last edited by MeowMan; 12-03-2009 at 08:36 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

12-03-2009, 07:03 PM	#5
MeowMan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Pegasus Gender: Posts: 6,606 Thanks: 849 Thanked 208 Times in 132 Posts Blog Entries: 46	Um.. I kinda did do that..

12-03-2009, 07:11 PM	#7
MeowMan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Pegasus Gender: Posts: 6,606 Thanks: 849 Thanked 208 Times in 132 Posts Blog Entries: 46	Oh. Um.... That wouldn't work for me. Just read the one that's highest up first.

12-03-2009, 09:37 PM	#10
Dizzy Podiaphobe Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 19,359 Thanks: 1,764 Thanked 1,161 Times in 804 Posts Blog Entries: 116	Try to avoid using text wherever it may clash with the background. As a matter of fact, work on your colors. If you know how to edit colors, then use that. Get subtler shades.

12-03-2009, 09:38 PM	#11
MeowMan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Pegasus Gender: Posts: 6,606 Thanks: 849 Thanked 208 Times in 132 Posts Blog Entries: 46	Excuse me? Subtler? Yeah, I know how to edit colors, but for some reason, my computer wont let me use them.

12-03-2009, 09:51 PM	#12
Dizzy Podiaphobe Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 19,359 Thanks: 1,764 Thanked 1,161 Times in 804 Posts Blog Entries: 116	Notice the subtler shades. About your sprites: The fact that your palette matches mine disturbs me.

12-03-2009, 09:56 PM	#13
Metal Man Fairy-Slaying Maniac Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: 1592 Miles Away From Here Gender: Posts: 18,062 Thanks: 148 Thanked 683 Times in 482 Posts	May I suggest saving in PNG instead of hueg BMPs?

12-04-2009, 12:27 PM	#15
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	So did I get killed? Tip: If the color of your text is going clash with the background either change it or use word bubbles. Last edited by Redshirt; 12-04-2009 at 02:13 PM.

12-04-2009, 03:35 PM	#16
MeowMan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Pegasus Gender: Posts: 6,606 Thanks: 849 Thanked 208 Times in 132 Posts Blog Entries: 46	DZ: 1.What does "subtler" mean? 2.That's probably because you made them. Metal Man: Yeah.. I though that I was saving them as PNGs but the thing switched on me. Mushman: No. You'll see what happens to you.

12-04-2009, 04:47 PM	#17
Eric Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Up your arse and around the corner. Gender: Posts: 1,343 Thanks: 236 Thanked 65 Times in 51 Posts	So I'm...Evil? JK Evil is AWSUM.

12-04-2009, 04:50 PM	#18
MeowMan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Pegasus Gender: Posts: 6,606 Thanks: 849 Thanked 208 Times in 132 Posts Blog Entries: 46	You only read the first one, didn't you? DZ is evil, too.

12-04-2009, 04:53 PM	#19
Eric Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Up your arse and around the corner. Gender: Posts: 1,343 Thanks: 236 Thanked 65 Times in 51 Posts	no I read both... I'd rather be a loner though... Is this what you thought I would be offended by?

12-04-2009, 04:55 PM	#20
MeowMan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Pegasus Gender: Posts: 6,606 Thanks: 849 Thanked 208 Times in 132 Posts Blog Entries: 46	Err.. Yeah..