New Add-on thingy - VGF

Brooser · 04-30-2004, 09:09 PM

Alright, until we get a better title, that's what it is. So anyway, to stop any confusion there may be, this isn't part of the other add-on. This is a completely different one. Anyway, if you're using your own character, just use this form:

NAME:
AGE:
GENDER:
RACE:
OCCUPATION:
PLACE OF ORIGIN:
HAIR:
EYES:
SKIN:
CLOTHING:
FATHER:
MOTHER:
SIBLINGS:
SKILLS:
WEAPONS/ITEMS:
PERSONALITY:
A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST:
AN AMBITION OF YOURS:

If you make your own character, you have all rights of making your own life story, blah blah blah, and no one else can change it.

The timeline that we'll be using is in the gap between Ocarina of Time and Wind Waker, before the world gets flooded. I think we've agreed on 20 or 30 years after OoT. Um, I think that's it, but if you think of anything I forgot, just tell me!

[ May 01, 2004, 11:31 AM: Message edited by: Brooser Koopa ]

Brooser · 04-30-2004, 09:32 PM

NAME: Lokuta Evan Zale
AGE: 14
GENDER: Male
RACE: Zora
OCCUPATION: Odd jobs
PLACE OF ORIGIN: Zora's Domain
HAIR: None
EYES: Blue
SKIN: Light Aqua
CLOTHING: Brown tunic
FATHER: Lokuta Hermes Zale (I dunno, he changed his name for something. Maybe that bounty on his head?)
MOTHER: Nami Rena Zale
SIBLINGS: None
SKILLS: Good at archery, Can breath underwater as well as on land (duh)
WEAPONS/ITEMS: Zora bow and Arrows
PERSONALITY: Outgoing and courageous (though sometimes runs into danger without thinking about consequences), doesn't like being told what to do.
A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Lokuta was born and raised in Zora's Domain, and was named after his father. His father died in battle when he was two and his mother fell ill when he was five, eventually dying. Left without parents, he was taken care of by Adonia Delila, a kind but stern widowed Zora with no children. When he turned 14, he took after his father and went out on his own, travelling Hyrule and doing odd jobs. Is currently in Kakariko village.
AN AMBITION OF YOURS: To find some purpose in life.

[ May 02, 2004, 01:30 PM: Message edited by: Brooser Koopa ]

King_Link_Mario · 04-30-2004, 10:55 PM

NAME: Magroth (his is title "Magroth the Defender")
AGE: 20
GENDER: Male
RACE: Hylian
OCCUPATION: Swordsman-for-hire
PLACE OF ORIGIN: Castle town.
HAIR: Brown.
EYES: Green.
SKIN: Tan
CLOTHING: Armor over chest, for arms ( I think that's the name for the area from shoulder to Elbow.) and for legs (I think that's the name for the area from hip to knee) with chain mail connecting at his joints (shoulder, elbow e.t.c.). grey cloth underneath and a blue cape.
FATHER: Uther- Deceased.
MOTHER: Sylva- age 42
SIBLINGS: none
SKILLS: Swordfighting.
WEAPONS/ITEMS: Broadsword.
PERSONALITY: Kindly and independent.
A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Was a Hylian soldier but quit just before Ganondorf's reign. Remaind in hiding during his control but opened service as a soldier-for-hire shortly after his overthrow. He saw it as a good occupation because Ganondorf was gone but some evil still existed in Hyrule, and those who could still fight and defend the regrowing nation were far and few.
AN AMBITION OF YOURS: Defend Hyrule from evil.

There. No magic skills whatsoever. You can't overpower a swordsman right?

[ April 30, 2004, 11:00 PM: Message edited by: King Link Mario ]

Blue Bomber 4 ever · 05-01-2004, 10:17 AM

NAME: Blue
AGE: 15
GENDER: Male
RACE: Hylian
OCCUPATION: Training to become a knight at castle.
PLACE OF ORIGIN: Kokiriko Village
HAIR: Brown
EYES: Green
SKIN: Pale
BUILD: Tall, somewhat muscular.
CLOTHING: Blue tunic
FATHER: Atreyu, a soldier. He died when his house burned down.
MOTHER: Catherine. She died giving birth to Blue.
SIBLINGS: None.
SKILLS: Fighting (spears and swords, though he has no sword).
WEAPONS/ITEMS: Spear, a piece of wood he has been using as a shield.
PERSONALITY: Doesn't sweat the small stuff. He can get crazy, and he has very little concern for his own well being. He is a nice guy and will often help out old people.
A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Blue's mother died, leaving him to his father. Atreyu was really at a loss for a name, so he just named his son after his favorite colour (thank din it wasn't pink) Blue had always wanted to become a soldier when he was younger, and when he turned 10, his father began teaching him to fight. Blue really enjoyed this. His house burned down when he was about 13, and his father never got out. He went to castle town, and managed to get into the castle to train to become a knight. He is doing very well, and can even hold his own against a few of the more experienced soldiers.
AMBITION: To become a knight, like his dad.

This WAS long enough after OoT for the world to get back to normal, right? if mine sucks too hard, please let me know.

[ May 01, 2004, 10:21 AM: Message edited by: Knuckles The Echidna ]

Brooser · 05-01-2004, 10:21 AM

From what I understood, it was. And no, your post is good.

Blue Bomber 4 ever · 05-01-2004, 10:21 AM

okay thanks.

King_Link_Mario · 05-01-2004, 10:34 AM

How long after Ganondorf's defeat does this tke place?

Brooser · 05-01-2004, 10:43 AM

I was thinking...maybe a year or two before Hyrule gets flooded? So it would be 90 or more years after Ganondorfs reign...But in the game it does say that Ganondorf came back, and that was why the gods flooded the world...so maybe he's around in this story?

Blue Bomber 4 ever · 05-01-2004, 10:49 AM

I'm not a fan of the flood, myself, but it's up to the rest of you if you want it.

Pieist · 05-01-2004, 11:09 AM

OOC: Yes, finally it's up

NAME: Mersheti Esel
AGE: 16
GENDER: Male
RACE: Hylian
OCCUPATION: Blacksmith
PLACE OF ORIGIN: Kokoperta
HAIR: Brown
EYES: Blue
SKIN: lightly tan
CLOTHING: brown tunic
FATHER: Intelligenter Esel
MOTHER: unknown
SIBLINGS: Storrischer (named after his grandfather, who was a famous assassin)he is deacesed
SKILLS: making swords
WEAPONS/ITEMS: a sword that has been in the family for several generations, and the diary of the assassin.
PERSONALITY: anti-social
A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: When he was 10 yrs old, his brother went off to fight in a war. A few weeks later a letter came home saying his brother killed himself in battle. Since his brother died, he had to take up blacksmithing to support him and his father.
AN AMBITION OF YOURS: To leave Kokoperta and get a better life in Hyrule.

[ May 02, 2004, 03:56 PM: Message edited by: Lava64 ]

The Yoshimaster · 05-01-2004, 11:25 AM

^^^I think the story should take twenty or thirty years after OoT... if it took place ninety years after, then everyone in WW would remember the flood. Anyways...

NAME: Daevo
AGE: 23
GENDER: Male
RACE: Hylian
OCCUPATION: Mercenary
PLACE OF ORIGIN: Lon Lon Ranch
HAIR: Black
EYES: Brown
SKIN: Tan
CLOTHING: Tattered work pants and shirt, pieces of armor taken from various soldiers
FATHER: Ido
MOTHER: Melissa
SIBLINGS: Dirgo, younger brother
SKILLS: Skilled swordsman, archer
WEAPONS/ITEMS: Quiver and bow, sword, dagger, pack, false papers for easy travel
PERSONALITY: Silent, high endurance level, patient but vicious once provoked to anger, cold towards others
A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Daevo was born to Ido and Melissa at Lon Lon Ranch, where his father taught him how to use a sword and a bow. Soon Daevo could use both as good, or better, as his father. However, Daevo didn't like life on the ranch. One thing led to another, and Ido kicked him out. Daevo was 16. For the next seven years, he spent his time roaming from town to town, making a living as a mercenary for underground organizations.
AN AMBITION OF YOURS: To be feared by all as a dangerous assasin.

EDIT(5/25): Here are some pictures of Daevo. The one on the left is Daevo hiding from the mob; the one on the right is him entering Castle Town for the first time.

[ May 25, 2004, 09:54 PM: Message edited by: Yoshimaster Sees All, Knows All ]

Brooser · 05-01-2004, 11:26 AM

I guess that'll work...I'll need to change my stuff, then...Yeah, that'll work better. That way, the story can be less about the games.

[ May 01, 2004, 11:30 AM: Message edited by: Brooser Koopa ]

chickenpotpiepie · 05-01-2004, 11:31 AM

Wait, let me get this strait, has it been nintey years? I want to know how old I should make my character. Also, do you guys think he should age out of the forest, or still resemble a child? Because I'll get a new character I Cidos gonna be nintey.

Brooser · 05-01-2004, 11:33 AM

It takes place twenty or thirty years after OoT.

The Yoshimaster · 05-01-2004, 11:37 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Lt. Fudge:
Wait, let me get this strait, has it been nintey years? I want to know how old I should make my character. Also, do you guys think he should age out of the forest, or still resemble a child? Because I'll get a new character I Cidos gonna be nintey.

Kokiri never grow up, but I doubt they're immortal.

chickenpotpiepie · 05-01-2004, 11:48 AM

I remember something about them being immortal...

chickenpotpiepie · 05-01-2004, 01:15 PM

NAME: Cido
AGE: 425 (appears as a 13 year old boy)
GENDER: Male
RACE: Kokiri
OCCUPATION: none
PLACE OF ORIGIN: Kokiri Forest
HAIR: Blonde
EYES: Green
SKIN: White
CLOTHING: Kokiri Tunic and a hat
FATHER: none
MOTHER: none
SIBLINGS: none
SKILLS: climbing, sprinting
WEAPONS/ITEMS: spear
PERSONALITY: saucy yet carefree
A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Grew up in kokiri forest... that's about it.
AN AMBITION OF YOURS: Wants to see beyond the forest.

OoC: I decided to make him 25 years older. It's right inbetween what Brooser said. This doesn't have to be the official time jump from the last story. I don't know if Kokori are immortal or not. Everyone post your opinion about the lifespan of Kokori and I will go with the majority. If they die I will get a new character and you can ignore this one.

PVanderbilt · 05-01-2004, 02:18 PM

NAME: Jacob
AGE: 17
GENDER: Male
RACE: Hylian
OCCUPATION: Stable-boy in Hyrule Castle. His main job is caring for the Prince's steeds.
PLACE OF ORIGIN: Hyrule. Although his parents originally came from a distant kingdom, Jacob was born in Hyrule and sports pointed ears.
HAIR: Brown and curly.
EYES: Green
SKIN: Tan
CLOTHING: A dark green tunic. He also occasonally wears a large, black cloak.
FATHER: Peter Kurtzberg
MOTHER: Gwen Kurtzberg
SIBLINGS:
SKILLS: Jacob is very intelligent and resourceful. He is a skilled warrior, although he opposes violence unless it is absolutely necessary.
WEAPONS/ITEMS: He owns a dagger that was given to him by a mysterious stranger. On the shealth, there is a picture of a lizard.
PERSONALITY: Jacob tries to keep a positive look on life, with great difficulty. He tends to notice the worst qualities of people and considers himself a loner. He is unhappy with his job, although he hardly ever openly complains. He is very loyal to his friends, but these are few, or at least he believes so.
A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Peter and Gwen Kurtzberg emigrated into Hyrule several years before Jacob was born. Why they chose to leave their home was never fully discussed with Jacob, but he was always led to believe that they were refugees from some horrific war. As he grew older, he developed charisma. He befriended a castle guard, who was able to get him his current job. Jacob was thrilled to be working in the castle at first, but soon became annoyed with many of the people he met there.
AN AMBITION OF YOURS: He feels that there are bigger and better things that he should be doing.

PVanderbilt · 05-01-2004, 03:24 PM

And away we go.....:

=-------------------------------------------------

It was time for a change.

Jacob awoke with a start, short of breath and drenched in his sweat. It stung his eyes and held him to his bed. The night terrors were getting worse. His head pounded as he slowly rose, grimacing slightly, trying to recall the phantoms that had flown through his mind as he lay sleeping. As his eyes focused to the morning, he steadied himself at his table and looked around his shack. The sun's early rays seeped through his windows and illuminated the shack in a peaceful glow.

Jacob's shack was meager, to say the least. It held only one room, with his bed on one side and his table and cabinets on the other, but it's location on the castle grounds was a priceless incentive. Deep within the heart of the kingdom, it would be a near impossible target to destroy, were there an invasion. But that was unlikely.

The kingdom of Hyrule knew no enemies, and it lived its days in peace and prosperity. Jacob had heard days of different days, when the world was a much darker place, but he found them hard to believe. Or exaggerated, at least. As he dressed, he began planning his day in his head. At noon, he planned to... Then it dawned on him. Rushing to the window, he looked up to the sun.

He cursed under his breath. He had slept several hours to late. The Prince would be furious. He quickly opened the door and began running to the stables.

I don't believe this! His mind yelled. I’ll be banished from the kingdom! Or worse!

He continued down the road until he came to a small building beside the castle proper.
The stable was easily twice (perhaps thrice) the size of Jacob’s humble home, but Jacob’s shack
didn’t have to provide for the prince’s horses. Jacob slowed his pace and began to breathe
heavily as he neared the entrance, his mind cursing all the while, when he heard behind him a
voice all too familiar.

“Well, it appears that the stable-boy has finally decide to bless us with his appearance.
Good show.”

Damn.

Slowly, Jacob turned.

There, waiting for him, was the Prince of Hyrule. His dark eyed glared at Jacob.

"I'm sorry, sir," he said.

"I daresay you should be. The knights in training expected their horses to be ready by now. You have cost us precious time. Now, come on, we haven't much time."

An hour or so passed, as Jacob prepared the horses. He did not think to much of war, and therefore of the knights, partly because he thought the whole thing unnecessary. Wars were gone. A thing belonging to an older time. They just didn't happen today, in Hyrule at least.

He had discussed these things one time in the Hyrule Market, when an old man had overheard him.

"I remember an older time," the old man muttered. "I remember war... and death. I remember when the king himself had lost his throne and a mad man took control of the whole blasted kingdom! You... you and everyone else... the entire world... owes their lives to one man. One boy. He saved us all."

Jacob found this hard to believe.

"When was this?" he asked. "When you were a boy?"

The old man sighed.

"This was hardly a quarter of a century ago."

Jacob was shocked.

"When you foreget your past..." the man mumbled, as he wandered slowly away, "you never know your future."

As Jacob finsihed preparing the horses, he recalled the old man's words. What did he mean?

"I daresay, Stable-Boy, are you finished?" the Prince asked impatiently.

"Yes," Jacob replied. "I apologize again for my tardiness."

"Well, be off then." He waved Jacob away.

Jacob left the stable, and begin his slow march back to his shack. Without warning, thunder cracked the sky and a heavey rain began to fall.

"Damn," he muttered. "I hate the rain."

OoC: This isn't the flood, just a bit of foreshadowing...

[ May 01, 2004, 06:07 PM: Message edited by: TheLizardman ]

The Yoshimaster · 05-01-2004, 03:42 PM

Daevo's face was inches away from stinking mud, and he cursed the sky. He lay in deep grass somewhere in Hyrule Field, which, as soon as the rain began, became a festering quagmire. Still, he didn't dare raise his head, since he could still hear the search party scouring the field.

Reflecting on his crime, Daevo couldn't honestly say he was sorry. He was sitting at the bar in Kakariko, late the previous night. Then a fat, bearded man, smelling of gin, started speaking hoarsely into his ear, warning him to get off his seat. Daevo was sitting on the man's seat, apparently. Daevo didn't move. Suddenly, the man shoved him off the seat and with a quick flick of the wrist, made a weapon out of a broken bottle. The man darted forward, and moments later, he lay on the floor, with Daevo's dagger deep in his gut.

All night long, and well into the morning, the Kakariko police and several volunteers searched desperately for Daevo. But as his job required, he was very good at hiding.

Even when it stank this bad.

Finally, unhappily, the search party gave up, and headed back home. Daevo waited until he could no longer hear them, then he sprang out of the muddy grass and ran off.

Daevo was rather proud of his narrow escape, but he was still aware that he was a wanted man.

"I'd better find someplace where I can keep a low profile," he muttered.

It was at that moment that he noticed the glorious gate of Hyrule Castle, barely visible some miles away. He had been there several times before, and he noticed that it was always crowded.

Shifting his pack, Daevo walked through the gate.

04-30-2004, 09:09 PM	#1
Brooser Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Over yonder points Gender: Posts: 3,213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,732.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,232.00 Donate	Alright, until we get a better title, that's what it is. So anyway, to stop any confusion there may be, this isn't part of the other add-on. This is a completely different one. Anyway, if you're using your own character, just use this form: NAME: AGE: GENDER: RACE: OCCUPATION: PLACE OF ORIGIN: HAIR: EYES: SKIN: CLOTHING: FATHER: MOTHER: SIBLINGS: SKILLS: WEAPONS/ITEMS: PERSONALITY: A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: AN AMBITION OF YOURS: If you make your own character, you have all rights of making your own life story, blah blah blah, and no one else can change it. The timeline that we'll be using is in the gap between Ocarina of Time and Wind Waker, before the world gets flooded. I think we've agreed on 20 or 30 years after OoT. Um, I think that's it, but if you think of anything I forgot, just tell me! [ May 01, 2004, 11:31 AM: Message edited by: Brooser Koopa ]

04-30-2004, 09:32 PM	#2
Brooser Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Over yonder points Gender: Posts: 3,213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,732.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,232.00 Donate	NAME: Lokuta Evan Zale AGE: 14 GENDER: Male RACE: Zora OCCUPATION: Odd jobs PLACE OF ORIGIN: Zora's Domain HAIR: None EYES: Blue SKIN: Light Aqua CLOTHING: Brown tunic FATHER: Lokuta Hermes Zale (I dunno, he changed his name for something. Maybe that bounty on his head?) MOTHER: Nami Rena Zale SIBLINGS: None SKILLS: Good at archery, Can breath underwater as well as on land (duh) WEAPONS/ITEMS: Zora bow and Arrows PERSONALITY: Outgoing and courageous (though sometimes runs into danger without thinking about consequences), doesn't like being told what to do. A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Lokuta was born and raised in Zora's Domain, and was named after his father. His father died in battle when he was two and his mother fell ill when he was five, eventually dying. Left without parents, he was taken care of by Adonia Delila, a kind but stern widowed Zora with no children. When he turned 14, he took after his father and went out on his own, travelling Hyrule and doing odd jobs. Is currently in Kakariko village. AN AMBITION OF YOURS: To find some purpose in life. [ May 02, 2004, 01:30 PM: Message edited by: Brooser Koopa ]

04-30-2004, 10:55 PM	#3
King_Link_Mario Member Join Date: May 2001 Location: Uh.... Somewhere?? Posts: 791 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 677.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,177.00 Donate	NAME: Magroth (his is title "Magroth the Defender") AGE: 20 GENDER: Male RACE: Hylian OCCUPATION: Swordsman-for-hire PLACE OF ORIGIN: Castle town. HAIR: Brown. EYES: Green. SKIN: Tan CLOTHING: Armor over chest, for arms ( I think that's the name for the area from shoulder to Elbow.) and for legs (I think that's the name for the area from hip to knee) with chain mail connecting at his joints (shoulder, elbow e.t.c.). grey cloth underneath and a blue cape. FATHER: Uther- Deceased. MOTHER: Sylva- age 42 SIBLINGS: none SKILLS: Swordfighting. WEAPONS/ITEMS: Broadsword. PERSONALITY: Kindly and independent. A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Was a Hylian soldier but quit just before Ganondorf's reign. Remaind in hiding during his control but opened service as a soldier-for-hire shortly after his overthrow. He saw it as a good occupation because Ganondorf was gone but some evil still existed in Hyrule, and those who could still fight and defend the regrowing nation were far and few. AN AMBITION OF YOURS: Defend Hyrule from evil. There. No magic skills whatsoever. You can't overpower a swordsman right? [ April 30, 2004, 11:00 PM: Message edited by: King Link Mario ]

05-01-2004, 10:17 AM	#4
Blue Bomber 4 ever Member Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: your moms bed Posts: 1,973 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 592.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,092.00 Donate	NAME: Blue AGE: 15 GENDER: Male RACE: Hylian OCCUPATION: Training to become a knight at castle. PLACE OF ORIGIN: Kokiriko Village HAIR: Brown EYES: Green SKIN: Pale BUILD: Tall, somewhat muscular. CLOTHING: Blue tunic FATHER: Atreyu, a soldier. He died when his house burned down. MOTHER: Catherine. She died giving birth to Blue. SIBLINGS: None. SKILLS: Fighting (spears and swords, though he has no sword). WEAPONS/ITEMS: Spear, a piece of wood he has been using as a shield. PERSONALITY: Doesn't sweat the small stuff. He can get crazy, and he has very little concern for his own well being. He is a nice guy and will often help out old people. A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Blue's mother died, leaving him to his father. Atreyu was really at a loss for a name, so he just named his son after his favorite colour (thank din it wasn't pink) Blue had always wanted to become a soldier when he was younger, and when he turned 10, his father began teaching him to fight. Blue really enjoyed this. His house burned down when he was about 13, and his father never got out. He went to castle town, and managed to get into the castle to train to become a knight. He is doing very well, and can even hold his own against a few of the more experienced soldiers. AMBITION: To become a knight, like his dad. This WAS long enough after OoT for the world to get back to normal, right? if mine sucks too hard, please let me know. [ May 01, 2004, 10:21 AM: Message edited by: Knuckles The Echidna ]

05-01-2004, 10:21 AM	#5
Brooser Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Over yonder points Gender: Posts: 3,213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,732.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,232.00 Donate	From what I understood, it was. And no, your post is good.

05-01-2004, 10:34 AM	#7
King_Link_Mario Member Join Date: May 2001 Location: Uh.... Somewhere?? Posts: 791 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 677.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,177.00 Donate	How long after Ganondorf's defeat does this tke place?

05-01-2004, 10:43 AM	#8
Brooser Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Over yonder points Gender: Posts: 3,213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,732.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,232.00 Donate	I was thinking...maybe a year or two before Hyrule gets flooded? So it would be 90 or more years after Ganondorfs reign...But in the game it does say that Ganondorf came back, and that was why the gods flooded the world...so maybe he's around in this story?

05-01-2004, 10:49 AM	#9
Blue Bomber 4 ever Member Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: your moms bed Posts: 1,973 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 592.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,092.00 Donate	I'm not a fan of the flood, myself, but it's up to the rest of you if you want it.

05-01-2004, 11:09 AM	#10
Pieist Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: In a graveyard Gender: Posts: 1,272 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,632.01 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,132.01 Donate	OOC: Yes, finally it's up NAME: Mersheti Esel AGE: 16 GENDER: Male RACE: Hylian OCCUPATION: Blacksmith PLACE OF ORIGIN: Kokoperta HAIR: Brown EYES: Blue SKIN: lightly tan CLOTHING: brown tunic FATHER: Intelligenter Esel MOTHER: unknown SIBLINGS: Storrischer (named after his grandfather, who was a famous assassin)he is deacesed SKILLS: making swords WEAPONS/ITEMS: a sword that has been in the family for several generations, and the diary of the assassin. PERSONALITY: anti-social A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: When he was 10 yrs old, his brother went off to fight in a war. A few weeks later a letter came home saying his brother killed himself in battle. Since his brother died, he had to take up blacksmithing to support him and his father. AN AMBITION OF YOURS: To leave Kokoperta and get a better life in Hyrule. [ May 02, 2004, 03:56 PM: Message edited by: Lava64 ]

05-01-2004, 11:25 AM	#11
The Yoshimaster Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Forest of Illusion Gender: Posts: 1,166 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 3,542.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,042.00 Donate	^^^I think the story should take twenty or thirty years after OoT... if it took place ninety years after, then everyone in WW would remember the flood. Anyways... NAME: Daevo AGE: 23 GENDER: Male RACE: Hylian OCCUPATION: Mercenary PLACE OF ORIGIN: Lon Lon Ranch HAIR: Black EYES: Brown SKIN: Tan CLOTHING: Tattered work pants and shirt, pieces of armor taken from various soldiers FATHER: Ido MOTHER: Melissa SIBLINGS: Dirgo, younger brother SKILLS: Skilled swordsman, archer WEAPONS/ITEMS: Quiver and bow, sword, dagger, pack, false papers for easy travel PERSONALITY: Silent, high endurance level, patient but vicious once provoked to anger, cold towards others A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Daevo was born to Ido and Melissa at Lon Lon Ranch, where his father taught him how to use a sword and a bow. Soon Daevo could use both as good, or better, as his father. However, Daevo didn't like life on the ranch. One thing led to another, and Ido kicked him out. Daevo was 16. For the next seven years, he spent his time roaming from town to town, making a living as a mercenary for underground organizations. AN AMBITION OF YOURS: To be feared by all as a dangerous assasin. EDIT(5/25): Here are some pictures of Daevo. The one on the left is Daevo hiding from the mob; the one on the right is him entering Castle Town for the first time. [ May 25, 2004, 09:54 PM: Message edited by: Yoshimaster Sees All, Knows All ]

05-01-2004, 11:26 AM	#12
Brooser Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Over yonder points Gender: Posts: 3,213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,732.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,232.00 Donate	I guess that'll work...I'll need to change my stuff, then...Yeah, that'll work better. That way, the story can be less about the games. [ May 01, 2004, 11:30 AM: Message edited by: Brooser Koopa ]

05-01-2004, 11:31 AM	#13
chickenpotpiepie Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Yoshi\'s Island Posts: 61 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 586.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,086.00 Donate	Wait, let me get this strait, has it been nintey years? I want to know how old I should make my character. Also, do you guys think he should age out of the forest, or still resemble a child? Because I'll get a new character I Cidos gonna be nintey.

05-01-2004, 11:33 AM	#14
Brooser Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Over yonder points Gender: Posts: 3,213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,732.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,232.00 Donate	It takes place twenty or thirty years after OoT.

05-01-2004, 11:48 AM	#16
chickenpotpiepie Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Yoshi\'s Island Posts: 61 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 586.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,086.00 Donate	I remember something about them being immortal...

05-01-2004, 01:15 PM	#17
chickenpotpiepie Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Yoshi\'s Island Posts: 61 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 586.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,086.00 Donate	NAME: Cido AGE: 425 (appears as a 13 year old boy) GENDER: Male RACE: Kokiri OCCUPATION: none PLACE OF ORIGIN: Kokiri Forest HAIR: Blonde EYES: Green SKIN: White CLOTHING: Kokiri Tunic and a hat FATHER: none MOTHER: none SIBLINGS: none SKILLS: climbing, sprinting WEAPONS/ITEMS: spear PERSONALITY: saucy yet carefree A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Grew up in kokiri forest... that's about it. AN AMBITION OF YOURS: Wants to see beyond the forest. OoC: I decided to make him 25 years older. It's right inbetween what Brooser said. This doesn't have to be the official time jump from the last story. I don't know if Kokori are immortal or not. Everyone post your opinion about the lifespan of Kokori and I will go with the majority. If they die I will get a new character and you can ignore this one.

05-01-2004, 02:18 PM	#18
PVanderbilt Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 54 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 558.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,058.00 Donate	NAME: Jacob AGE: 17 GENDER: Male RACE: Hylian OCCUPATION: Stable-boy in Hyrule Castle. His main job is caring for the Prince's steeds. PLACE OF ORIGIN: Hyrule. Although his parents originally came from a distant kingdom, Jacob was born in Hyrule and sports pointed ears. HAIR: Brown and curly. EYES: Green SKIN: Tan CLOTHING: A dark green tunic. He also occasonally wears a large, black cloak. FATHER: Peter Kurtzberg MOTHER: Gwen Kurtzberg SIBLINGS: SKILLS: Jacob is very intelligent and resourceful. He is a skilled warrior, although he opposes violence unless it is absolutely necessary. WEAPONS/ITEMS: He owns a dagger that was given to him by a mysterious stranger. On the shealth, there is a picture of a lizard. PERSONALITY: Jacob tries to keep a positive look on life, with great difficulty. He tends to notice the worst qualities of people and considers himself a loner. He is unhappy with his job, although he hardly ever openly complains. He is very loyal to his friends, but these are few, or at least he believes so. A SUMMARY OF YOUR PAST: Peter and Gwen Kurtzberg emigrated into Hyrule several years before Jacob was born. Why they chose to leave their home was never fully discussed with Jacob, but he was always led to believe that they were refugees from some horrific war. As he grew older, he developed charisma. He befriended a castle guard, who was able to get him his current job. Jacob was thrilled to be working in the castle at first, but soon became annoyed with many of the people he met there. AN AMBITION OF YOURS: He feels that there are bigger and better things that he should be doing.

05-01-2004, 03:24 PM	#19
PVanderbilt Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 54 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 558.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,058.00 Donate	And away we go.....: =------------------------------------------------- It was time for a change. Jacob awoke with a start, short of breath and drenched in his sweat. It stung his eyes and held him to his bed. The night terrors were getting worse. His head pounded as he slowly rose, grimacing slightly, trying to recall the phantoms that had flown through his mind as he lay sleeping. As his eyes focused to the morning, he steadied himself at his table and looked around his shack. The sun's early rays seeped through his windows and illuminated the shack in a peaceful glow. Jacob's shack was meager, to say the least. It held only one room, with his bed on one side and his table and cabinets on the other, but it's location on the castle grounds was a priceless incentive. Deep within the heart of the kingdom, it would be a near impossible target to destroy, were there an invasion. But that was unlikely. The kingdom of Hyrule knew no enemies, and it lived its days in peace and prosperity. Jacob had heard days of different days, when the world was a much darker place, but he found them hard to believe. Or exaggerated, at least. As he dressed, he began planning his day in his head. At noon, he planned to... Then it dawned on him. Rushing to the window, he looked up to the sun. He cursed under his breath. He had slept several hours to late. The Prince would be furious. He quickly opened the door and began running to the stables. I don't believe this! His mind yelled. I’ll be banished from the kingdom! Or worse! He continued down the road until he came to a small building beside the castle proper. The stable was easily twice (perhaps thrice) the size of Jacob’s humble home, but Jacob’s shack didn’t have to provide for the prince’s horses. Jacob slowed his pace and began to breathe heavily as he neared the entrance, his mind cursing all the while, when he heard behind him a voice all too familiar. “Well, it appears that the stable-boy has finally decide to bless us with his appearance. Good show.” Damn. Slowly, Jacob turned. There, waiting for him, was the Prince of Hyrule. His dark eyed glared at Jacob. "I'm sorry, sir," he said. "I daresay you should be. The knights in training expected their horses to be ready by now. You have cost us precious time. Now, come on, we haven't much time." An hour or so passed, as Jacob prepared the horses. He did not think to much of war, and therefore of the knights, partly because he thought the whole thing unnecessary. Wars were gone. A thing belonging to an older time. They just didn't happen today, in Hyrule at least. He had discussed these things one time in the Hyrule Market, when an old man had overheard him. "I remember an older time," the old man muttered. "I remember war... and death. I remember when the king himself had lost his throne and a mad man took control of the whole blasted kingdom! You... you and everyone else... the entire world... owes their lives to one man. One boy. He saved us all." Jacob found this hard to believe. "When was this?" he asked. "When you were a boy?" The old man sighed. "This was hardly a quarter of a century ago." Jacob was shocked. "When you foreget your past..." the man mumbled, as he wandered slowly away, "you never know your future." As Jacob finsihed preparing the horses, he recalled the old man's words. What did he mean? "I daresay, Stable-Boy, are you finished?" the Prince asked impatiently. "Yes," Jacob replied. "I apologize again for my tardiness." "Well, be off then." He waved Jacob away. Jacob left the stable, and begin his slow march back to his shack. Without warning, thunder cracked the sky and a heavey rain began to fall. "Damn," he muttered. "I hate the rain." OoC: This isn't the flood, just a bit of foreshadowing... [ May 01, 2004, 06:07 PM: Message edited by: TheLizardman ]

05-01-2004, 03:42 PM	#20
The Yoshimaster Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Forest of Illusion Gender: Posts: 1,166 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 3,542.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,042.00 Donate	Daevo's face was inches away from stinking mud, and he cursed the sky. He lay in deep grass somewhere in Hyrule Field, which, as soon as the rain began, became a festering quagmire. Still, he didn't dare raise his head, since he could still hear the search party scouring the field. Reflecting on his crime, Daevo couldn't honestly say he was sorry. He was sitting at the bar in Kakariko, late the previous night. Then a fat, bearded man, smelling of gin, started speaking hoarsely into his ear, warning him to get off his seat. Daevo was sitting on the man's seat, apparently. Daevo didn't move. Suddenly, the man shoved him off the seat and with a quick flick of the wrist, made a weapon out of a broken bottle. The man darted forward, and moments later, he lay on the floor, with Daevo's dagger deep in his gut. All night long, and well into the morning, the Kakariko police and several volunteers searched desperately for Daevo. But as his job required, he was very good at hiding. Even when it stank this bad. Finally, unhappily, the search party gave up, and headed back home. Daevo waited until he could no longer hear them, then he sprang out of the muddy grass and ran off. Daevo was rather proud of his narrow escape, but he was still aware that he was a wanted man. "I'd better find someplace where I can keep a low profile," he muttered. It was at that moment that he noticed the glorious gate of Hyrule Castle, barely visible some miles away. He had been there several times before, and he noticed that it was always crowded. Shifting his pack, Daevo walked through the gate.